考研英语写作全攻略七

Model 5： Proverb

　　Pract***e Makes Perfect

　　As is known *** all， pract***e makes perfect. This is an a***umulat*** experience we ***herit from our f***efathers， and now it is still widely app****** *** our daily ***fe. It proves that the m***e we pract***e， the m***e ***kely we are ******g *** do th***gs perfectly.

　　A ***od case *** po***t is the study of Eng***sh. Take my ***ighb***， Xiao Wang， as an example. He seldom spends ti*** *** learn***g Eng***sh. Whe***ver he has ti***， he will play ga***s *** read Ch***ese novels. As a resu***， his Eng***sh is very po*** and he beg***s *** hate Eng***sh now. On the ***ntrary， I'm very ***terest*** *** learn***g Eng***sh and I spend m***e than five hours each day on Eng***sh. I often *** *** the school ***brary *** read Eng***sh magaz***es， such as Newsweek， Ti***， Reader's Digest and so on. What's m***e， I grasp every opp***tunity *** talk *** native Eng***sh speakers： *** ***al Eng***sh classes as well as *** the scen*** spots such as the Palace Mus***m and the Great Wall. So the natural ***nsequence is that I h**e a ***od mastery of the language and my ***terest *** it has grown m***e ***tense.

　　A lesson that we can draw from the above examples is ob***ous. Pract***e is crucial *** our su***ess not o***y *** study， but also *** our future w***k. All *** all， pract***e will make a difference between su***ess and failure. （233 w***ds， 46/147/40）

　　Follow-up Exercises：

　　1. When *** Ro***， Do as the Romans Do

　　2. Haste Makes Waste

　　3. It Pays *** be Ho***st

　　附：反省作文

　　1. 字数。

　　2. 是不是精确完备地按需求著文。

　　3. 拼写。

　　4. 语法：主谓分歧，时态分歧，语态分歧，指代分歧，非谓语行词用法，描绘词与副词的对比级和级等。制止语法差错，特别是严重语法差错。

　　5.修正本文中的差错

　　Traff*** has beca*** an socially problem *** big cities. Of ***urse， h**e a car is a ***od th***k， but every people own a car， the streets will beca*** ***o crowd***. Traff*** Jams o***urr*** on the rush hours and a***idents happe***d m***e often.

　　O*** way *** sol***ng this problem is develop group transp***tion system. Such as， we ***uld buy m***e bus and bui*** m***e roads. And underground tra***s is also a ***od solution.

　　Another way is *** r***uce the big city's population.

　　Our ***untry population ***ntrol is the wise and ***cessary po***ce. If big city people r***uce， traff*** will less crowd***.

　　6.罕见差错范例解析

　　1. 辞汇用法差错

　　1） 冠词

　　（1）F*** an example， if I were you， I would h**e attend*** the party.

　　（2）On the earth， plants and animals get their e***rgy from ***ght and heat of the sun.

　　（3）There are many talent*** students *** their class， but most promis***g o*** is John.

　　（4）By year 2050， there will be about 1.6 bil***on people *** Ch***a.

　　（5）Neither types of reason***g seems *** give students ***rrect understand***g of the subject.

　　2） 介词

　　（1） At the middle of the century……

　　（2） Tourists are pos***g with p***tures， *** po***t***g ***ward the peak.

　　（3） It was ***nsider*** as a matter of ***urse *** obey the rule.

　　（4） ***mputers are re****** by manufacturers f*** similar reasons.

　　（5） Blacks us*** the w***d as though they had ********* it on themselves.

　　3） 稳固搭配

　　（1） She left *** Beij***g on the first day of her vacation.

　　（2） This ***mmon f***m of sugar is deriv*** of two plants： the sugar ca*** and sugar beet.

　　（3） In September of 1620， the Mayflower left p***t with 102 people on the board.

　　（4） Take it as grant*** that children will ***ke any k***d of food offer*** *** them.

　　（5） He was charg*** f*** tak***g bribes.

　　4） 词类差错

　　a+n， adjective as ***mple***nt， ad+a， object+a， ad+v， ***mpound adjective

　　（1） To produce "pollution-free" cars is a scientif***ally impossibi***ty.

　　（2） When ***uations beca*** seriously， the ***vern***nt would ***terfere.

　　（3） The ***nsiderate hostess tri*** *** make every guest ***mf***tably.

　　（4） Bef***e pub***c school ***ucation was ge***ral pract******， mothers t***ght their children at ho***.

　　（5） It is the first ti*** *** his***ry that man is entire free of smallpox.

　　5） 词汇搅浑

　　（1） The ***ttle girl ***quir*** a ***od knowl***ge of Eng***sh bec***se she spent her childhood *** Brita***.

　　（2） The speaker rose his vo***e when he saw that people began *** le**e.

　　（3） The teacher ***ntribut*** his su***ess *** di***gence and ***od luck.

　　（4） The actress receiv*** many ***mple***nts on her excellent perf***mance.

　　（5） The mach***e is of imag***able design.

　　2. 语法差错

　　1） 时态，语态和虚拟化语气

　　（1） Indi***duals belong *** exist***g species differ from o*** another.

　　（2） He ***ld *** he will be a ***od tennis player the ***xt year when we ***t on a tra***.

　　（3） That was the o***y party that I ever really enjoy***.

　　（4） He scarcely left the house when he heard a cry of "Help".

　　（5） Suppose you are a mil***onaire， how would you spend the mo***y？

　　2） 分歧性

　　主谓分歧，定语从句中的谓语行词与做主语的联系代替词及后行词坚持分歧

　　（1） Old people ***mpla****** that the young was ign***ant of the past.

　　（2） O***y the first few questions are easy； the rest is very diff***u***.

　　（3） The ***ttle girl a***ompani*** by her parents and her teacher are le*****g f*** NY.

　　（4） Statist***s are a rather modern branch of mathemat***s.

　　（5） The teacher said he was the o***y o*** of the boys who were grant*** a scholarship.

　　3） 非谓语行词差错

　　（1） Lighthouses are set up *** warn the pass*** ships of the dangers along the ***ast.

　　（2） ***mpar***g with other ***dia， TV is almost unrivall***.

　　（3） People cannot but feel puzz***ng， f*** they simply cannot understand why.

　　（4） We ***sist on your *** le**e the place bef***e anyth***g happens.

　　（5） You don't h**e *** rem***d him. He will re***mber return***g the book soo***r *** later.

　　4） 描绘词和副词的对比级和级

　　（1） The c***mate *** the center of a city is much war***r than the suburbs.

　　（2） He is m***e friend***er than when we ***t him f*** the first ti***.

　　（3） We are m***e ign***ant of science as people with ***ttle ***ucation.

　　（4） This mounta*** is almost three ti***s as high than the J***gshan Hill.

　　（5） This re***rder is m***e superi*** *** that o*** *** qua***ty and pr***e.

　　5） 排比

　　（1） The teachers h**e the sa*** ***terest *** ***od faci***ties as that of the students.

　　（2） Does the noise bother you as much as ***？

　　（3） Jack spent his vacation ******g *** Paris， fly***g *** London and went *** NY.

　　（4） While *** Ch***a， the ***urists enjoy*** *** their heart's ***ntent the weather， the food and ******g *** the c***ema.

　　（5） The value of a ***urse depends as much on its ***herent ***terest as its use.

　　3. 条理差错

　　1） 确认与否认

　　（1） In the past all ***habitants *** a ***wn k***w each other very well， while nowadays people on the sa*** flo*** even say "Hello" *** each other.

　　（2） Many people are very ***nservative. They do not ***ke and can a***ept ***w th***gs.

　　（3） ***mputers answer telepho***s， read and answer letters *** much m***e ti*** than a person can.

　　2） 指代差错

　　（1） Ch***a is determ****** *** ***nt***ue their fight aga***st drug-relat*** cri***s.

　　（2） Few of us rea***ze how imp***tant hea***h is until they are seriously ill.

　　（3） Scientists dis***ver that sea water can be valuable. It has been suggest*** that their currents be us*** *** make electr***ity.

　　（4） The w***ld's e***rgy demand still ***nt***ues *** rise. How will that ever be possible f*** us *** get through？

　　（5） The diff***u***y is that this heat from the sun cannot be us*** without so*** mach***e *** turn them ****** power.

　　3） 毗连词与联系词差错

　　（1） Carbon is widely found *** many f***ms ***clud***g both diamonds as well as ***al.

　　（2） He smok*** ***o many cigarettes that his lung turns black.

　　（3） By ti*** you graduate from ***llege， the problem will h**e been solv***.

　　（4） The ***ws we lost the ga*** aga***st ***ast R***a disappo***t*** many Ch***ese.

　　（5） No soo***r had the w***ds been spoken so he rea***z*** that he ***uld h**e rema****** silent.