GMAT作文范文1

analysis of argu***nt # 1

　　the follow***g appear*** as part of an annual rep***t sent *** s***ckholders by olymp*** foods, a process*** of frozen foods.

　　“over ti***, the ***sts of process***g *** down bec***se as ***ganizations learn how *** do th***gs better, they be****** m***e eff***ient. *** ***l*** film process***g, f*** example, the ***st of a 3-by-5-***ch pr***t fell from 50 cents f*** five-day ser***ce *** 1970 *** 20 cents f*** o***-day ser***ce *** 1984. the sa*** pr***ciple app***es *** the process***g of food. and s***ce olymp*** foods will soon celebrate its twenty-fifth birthday, we can expect that our long experience will enable us *** m***imize ***sts and thus maximize profits.”

　　answer

　　the ***th*** argues, us***g facts from the ***l***-film process***g ***dustry's downward trend *** ***st over 24 years, that olymp*** foods will be able *** cut ***sts and thus maximize profits *** the future. the ***th*** bases his ***nclusion on the ge***ra***zation that ***ganizations learn *** r***uce ***sts over ti*** and, s***ce olymp*** foods has 25 years experience *** the food process***g ***dustry, its ***sts ***uld h**e dec******d ***nsiderably. there are two serious flaws *** the argu***nt.

　　first, the argu***nt uses a f******y analogy between the ***l***-film process***g ***dustry and the food process***g ***dustry. analogies drawn between the two fields are highly suspect bec***se there are many serious differences. while the film process***g ***dustry faces a relatively simply process***g challenge, food producers must ***ntend with ***ntam***ation, transp***tation and farm production (much m***e serious challenges). thus, it is ***kely much m***e diff***u*** *** wr***g eff***iency improve***nts *** the food ***dustry.

　　se***nd, the ***th*** uses a sweep***g ge***ra***zation. the ***th***'s pr******tion of marg*** improve***nts re***es on the optimist*** assumption that olymp*** foods' 25 years of experience will ******mat***ally resu*** *** operational eff***iencies. the problem with this is that improve***nts *** processes do not o***ur ******mat***ally over ti***, they require tre***ndous eff***t at ***nt***uous improve***nt and they require potential room f*** improve***nt. it is possible olymp*** food has ***mit*** room f*** improve***nt *** lacks the managerial will *** improve its operations. thus, there is no guarantee of improv*** operational eff***iency over ti***.

　　the ***th***'s argu***nt has two seriously flaw*** assumptions. the ***th*** ***uld strengthen his ***nclusion by pro***d***g examples of how the ***mpany has lear***d how *** improve its operations over 25 years and imple***nt*** those changes.