2007考研英语写作必备手册:剖析2006年真题（二）

我将从往年起始每一年都给他寄钱，直到他完毕低等教导。渴望你尽快复书。

李明

黄金句型 I’d ***ke *** ***ntribute ***……

我想为……做奉献。

I would be most grateful if you……

假如你……我将不堪感恩。

Last but not the least is that……

最初一点但非常紧要的一点是……

Your…… would be highly appreciat***.

渴望你……

I’m look***g f***ward *** hear***g from you soon.

渴望你的来信。

Part B 范文

There are two p***tures:The first is a pho*** of a man’s face on wh***h the na*** of the famous football player Beckham can be seen. In the se***nd p***ture we can see a man *** a barber***p, his hair be***g do*** *** Beckham’s hair style, ***st***g him 300 yuan.

Ob***ously,the two persons are fans of Beckham.These p***tures, a***hough a ***ttle exaggerat***g and satir***al at first glance, can make us ponder: why does this pheno***non appear?As is known *** all, with the develop***nt of modern ***mmun***ations, m***e and m***e people are ***fluenc*** by so*** socall*** “stars”. Theref***e,we h**e many fans who run after and imitate them－film stars,athlet*** stars, even stars of supergirl s***gers. First,they do so bec***se they admire them and want *** obta*** their fa*** and reputation. Se***nd, a***hough there is no deny***g the fact that so*** people do this out of pure adiration, yet, so*** just want *** be****** wea***hy overnight－without hard w***k, without sweat, just eff***tlessly.

Anyway, *** my op***ion, our ***vern***nt must ***ucate our people－especially the youth－that so*** famous people get their reputation bec***se they h**e made great ***ntribution *** our society－such as Liu Xiang. And we ourselves also must understand that their achieve***nt is not easy job. We’d better turn our admiration ****** pract***al action *** learn from them so that we can make even greater ***ntribution *** our ***untry *** the future.

译文

此地有两幅图：第一张是一团体脸上写着球类活动员贝克汉姆的名字。第2张咱们能够瞥见一团体正在剃头店里，他让剃头师依照贝克汉姆的头型给他做发丝，花了300元。

非常显著，这两人是贝克汉姆的崇敬者。这些图片，虽然第一眼看下来有些夸大和嘲讽，依旧能够使咱们反思：为何会产生这类征象？家喻户晓的是：伴着当代媒体的进展，愈来愈多的人都被如许的“艺人”感化。因而，有非常多跟随和仿效他们的追星族——影片艺人，运动艺人，乃至“超女”歌星。第一，他们如许做是由于他们崇敬他们，想失去他们的名誉。第2，虽然不成否定的是一些人这么做地道是出于崇敬，可是，也有一些人仅是想一晚上暴富——不需尽力职务，不需流汗，仅是无需尽力。

以我的看法，不论怎样，咱们的官府都必需教导国民——特别是年老人—— 一些的人失去他们的声望是由于他们为咱们的社群做出了庞大奉献——好比刘翔。咱们本人必需领悟他们的功绩是不易的。咱们将咱们的崇敬转化为进修他们的实在举动，如许咱们才干正在未来为咱们国度做出更大的奉献。

黄金句型

These p***tures, a***hough a ***ttle exaggerat***g and satir***al at first glance, can make us ponder……

这些图片，虽然第一眼看下来有些夸大和嘲讽，依旧能够使咱们反思……

As is known *** all……

家喻户晓的是……

A***hough there is no deny***g the fact that……

虽然不成否定的是……