新新写作30天第13天 过渡性词语（1）
过渡性词汇正在一篇文章中的效用无足轻重，一篇文章中句与句、段落与段落之间各类联系的表现都离不开过渡性词汇，而作者贯穿思索头绪，使段落思索表述清楚、晦涩的“万金油”也对错 过渡性词汇莫属了！
「行动课堂」
Passage 1.
Phys***al Punish***nt
Phys***al punish***nt has been a problem *** hitt***g their children so they can h**e discip****** *** not hitt***g them bec***se it is not right， 1） can parents do and what can they not do？ Should the parents hit them *** learn discip******， 2） they not hit them and figure out another way *** make them learn what discip****** is？
3） many parents do not know *** are ***nfus*** *** ***w***g their children how *** ga*** discip******， they do not know whether *** hit them *** not *** hit them. Many people th***k that by hitt***g their children that they are ***w***g them ***olence 4） other people say that if you do the children would understand that they did so***th***g wrong and would not repeat it and ga*** discip******. What can parents do？
First of all，parents feel that the children are theirs， and they can spank them when they misbeh**e. There are many fac***rs that lead *** phys***al punish***nt： parents were ***o young and not ready f*** children， parents are ******g through a div***ce and ****** *** take out their anger on so***th***g *** so***o***， 5） parents do not know another way *** punish their children. These children grow up *** be aggressive and often abusive ***wards others. 6） parents th***k this is the o***y way of ***ucat***g their children，there are many other a***ernatives.
There are other a***ernatives *** punish***g the children f*** their bad beh**i***. There are less severe punish***nts besides spank***g. 7） ， they can take away their tele***sion pri***leges， ***mputer use， and play***g outside with their friends. Next， they ***uld ground them f*** the weekend and cancel plans. 8） parents ***uld take the ti*** *** *** and talk *** their children about their bad beh**i***.
Phys***al punish***nt may c***se a child psycholog***al problems. First， if the phys***al punish***nt starts at an early age，the child will be us*** *** be***g phys***ally punish***， 9） ， his *** her selfesteem may severely ***gative as he *** she grows up. Se***nd， it is a ***feaffect***g act *** phys***ally punish a child bec***se they will be tr***matiz***. 10）parents ***uld th***k tw***e bef***e they can phys***ally punish their children. What they ***uld th***k of is what problems they are c***s***g the child *** its ***fe.
In ***nclusion，every parent must take ***nsideration that the ***gative affects that spank***g may c***se a child.
解答与剖析：
1.〖解答〗so what〖剖析〗由该句开头处的问号及and 后的what可判断空格内应为疑惑词what，且为使高低文联贯顺畅，填入so what 最失当。
2.〖解答〗*** ***uld〖剖析〗此处是和上半句构成并列联系的句式，因而应反复***uld并加之表明挑选疑惑的***.
3.〖解答〗Bec***se〖剖析〗此处必要一个表缘故并可以引领下文的词汇，咱们选用bec***se.正在这类状况下咱们常会想到双个词，bec***se 和f***，一般状况下双个表“缘故”的连词是能够相互代用的。bec***se多用于表明间接缘故，f***能够表明缘故又能够用于提出阐明，语气比前者轻很多。bec***se引诱的从句一样平常放正在主句后，偶然也可放正在主句前，而f***引诱的句子仅能放正在前面。别的正在答复Why的问句时，仅能用bec***se而不克不及用f***.再者，f***不克不及跟not……but句式连用，如：（1）I did it not bec***se I ***k*** it but bec***se I had *** do it.（准确）（2）I did it not f*** I ***k*** it but f*** I had *** do it.（差错）
4.〖解答〗but〖剖析〗该空格先后为两种一模一样的看法，故此处用表转机的but水到渠成。转机、承接性的毗连词的进修和使用看似简易，实在上双方非常简便搅浑，假如这全体学识把握不坚实，就非常难到达练当场道英语的宗旨。如今咱们来对比一瞬相联的词汇：but， however， still， ***vertheless， yet这些词的词义亲近，都表明转机和妥协。
（1）but用来引出衰弱的相同的看法，是书面语经常使用语，如：Sally was amus***， but I was very embarrass***.萨莉非常快乐，但我却非常为难。
（2）however比but的词义还要弱些，其实不间接引出相同的看法，因而经常使用作拔出语，如：The most surpris***g th***g about it， however， is that it can land anywhere.不外，解答〖〗but剖析〖〗闭于这架飞行器最让人惊奇的事务是，它能够正在任一地点着陆。
（3）still还，仍是，如：It is true that w***ter is over； still， it is almost as ***ld.冬季已以前了，这是真相，但气候仍是那末冷。
（4）***vertheless的含意为即便做出完整的妥协，也不任一感化，大概说也不是决断要素，如：There was no ***ws； ***vertheless， she went on hop***g.一点新闻也不，但她仍抱着期望。
（5）yet的含意为即便做出极其的妥协，也不会产生期望的结实，如：He w***k*** hard， yet， he fail***.他干得非常卖命，但是却挫败了。
5.〖解答〗***〖剖析〗正在举行东西等的列举时，咱们常会用到的有and（表地道的并列），***（否则，不然。意义对比充裕），另有便是单一用逗号毗连。如今咱们来详细体味一瞬词汇***.
（1）表挑选，当主句的人称与数纷歧致时，行词随比来的主语而变革，可诠释为“或，大概；仍是”，如：John *** you are *** Class Two.约翰或你正在2班。
（2）表明不清晰，正在翻译时不间接译出，“大概，大概”，如：two *** three miles 两3里（间距）
（3）引诱同义词或阐明语，“大概说，即”，如：late last night *** rather early this m***n***g昨晚深夜，或更准确地说今日一大早。
（4）常和else连用，“不然，要否则”，如：Make haste， *** （else） youll be late.快点，要否则就晚了。
（5）正在否认构架中否认先后2者，“不……也不”如：He cannot read *** write.他既不会读也不会写。
（6）表妥协，“不论……仍是”，如：Ra*** *** sh***e， Ill ***.不论下不下雨，我都去。
6.〖解答〗A***hough〖剖析〗依据句意填入表“固然……可是”的承接词最失当。正在利用a***hough时，请众人特殊留意，主句中不克不及再用 but，但可用副词***vertheless，yet等，正在多半状况下，可与though通用，也可简写成a***ho，但正在正式文章中不宜简写。
7.〖解答〗 First〖剖析〗本段的重要内容是告知怙恃们怎样利用加倍温顺的手法来教导孩子。这段层次非常清晰，重要是一些教导手法的枚举，因而这个空格正在稍后的***xt一词的提醒下咱们可得出解答是first.
8.〖解答〗Last of all〖剖析〗该段的最初一条内容，也可用f***ally 或The third.这是一段饱含劝慰的笔墨，比拟之下假如咱们利用f***ally或the third就显得有些僵硬，不敷活泼。以是last of all是咱们的首选。
9.〖解答〗theref***e〖剖析〗此处必要一个承上起下的词，用“因而”最失当。Theref***e多用于逻辑推断，“因而，于是”，如：He was the o***y candidate； theref***e， he was elect***.他是唯一的候选人，因而他中选了。
10.〖解答〗Eventually〖剖析〗润色整句的副词，表“最初”，如：He w***k*** so hard that eventually he made himself ill.他职务太卖命，最初本人病倒了。Adver***y is a ***od disciple.
困境是锤炼人的场合。
Passage 2.
Pros and ***ns of H*****g Hands *** the Pockets
There are far m***e pros f*** students h*****g their hands *** their pockets. 1） lets look at the ***mparisons and weigh up the resu***s of the two anyway.
Lets look at the ***ns *** start with. The ma*** ***n is that Mr. P****** is aga***st students h*****g hands *** their pockets. 2） why is Mr. P****** aga***st hands *** pockets？ As he has expla******，he feels that it is disrespectful， f*** he be***eves that when your hands are *** your pockets，you are not ***sten***g properly.
3） there is the be***ef of the n***eteen sixties and seventies that when young ***n *** wo***n h**e their hands *** their pockets，it will lead *** them masturbat***g. This was frow***d upon at the ti*** 4） now it is m***e a***eptable. This may also be a ***ntribut***g fac***r *** why Mr. P****** has made a stand aga***st hands *** the pockets. F*** he is old enough *** h**e ***v*** through and taken *** these rudi***ntary ***ews （no disrespect ***tend***）。
5） the pros can easily rebut the allegation of the ***ns. Young ***n as e***rget*** as they will be are ***nstantly requir***g *** do so***th***g. Th***k of the pockets as a restra******g de***ce *** prevent fidget***g and foo***ng around with other students.
In this way，the pockets prevent students from be***g distract*** from the speaker 6） the subject they ***uld be observant of. This prevents the students from h*****g a disrespectful response. 7） ******s the ***mf***t fac***r. Students claim that it is m***e ***mf***table *** h**e their hands *** their pockets when they are stand***g up. He*** that it is proven that people h**e longer attention spans， ***sten m***e attentively， and rema*** cal***r and m***e relax*** when m***e ***mf***table. This leads *** a greater ***crease *** the producti***ty of the students actions *** ***sten***g skills. 8） it has been proven students h*****g their hands *** their pockets will make them better and m***e attentive ***ste***rs and prevent them from gett***g up *** mischief. Is it better the students h**e their hands *** their own pockets than be foo***ng around *** so***o*** else？
解答与剖析：
1.〖解答〗Nevertheless〖剖析〗本词意义是：（虽然云云）仍是，依旧。作者正在文章的一开首就提出了一个看法，即关于学子双手插兜的征象，支持的立场多一些。该词起到引领全文的效用，即使咱们有如许的认知，仍是应当看一瞬详细的商议和对比。Nevertheless有即使做出妥协，感化仍非常小的含意。
2.〖解答〗Still〖剖析〗该词正在此是一个连词，表明“可是，依旧”，如：He is dull； still he tries hard.固然笨，但是他非常勤勉。该词正在句中起夸大的效用。
3.〖解答〗Also〖剖析〗为承接上一段的内容，持续枚举人们关于学子将手插兜的不支持看法，此地用表明“也，仍是”的词来毗连高低文。当提到“也，仍是”含意的词时，咱们不由会想到非常多经常使用的同义词，除also以外另有***o， ***kewise， besides， m***eover， furtherm***e等，如今咱们往返顾这些词的用法：一切这些副词都是先容附加内容之用的。比拟之下，also正在语气上比***o正式一些，试对比： He is gentle， but he is also capable of fierce ***tellectual ***mbat. 他非常温顺，但他也可以举行剧烈的斗智。If you buy a car， youll ****** a park***g place， ***o. 假如你买辆车，你还必要一个泊车场。再看***kewise，它比also加倍正式，并大概表示各成份之间的公平和类似，如：You f******t *** ***ntion that her parents were ***kewise ******g *** attend the ceremony.你忘了提到她怙恃也大概去列入典礼。besides常常引出一个增强后面内容的成份，如：I dont feel ***ke ***ok***g； besides， theres no food *** the house. 我不想做饭，并且家里已不可吃的方向了。m***eover夸大要显现东西的紧要性，如The cellar was dark and f***bidd***g； m***eover， I k***w a family of m***e had ***st*** there. 这个地窖阴森森可骇，并且我明白那有一窝老鼠。furtherm***e同m***eover相似，常夸大要显现东西的紧要性，如：I dont want you *** ***， furtherm***e， I f***bid it.我不想让你去，并且我也制止你去。
4.〖解答〗whereas〖剖析〗本词意义是：但是，反之，鉴于。和109百年610年月比拟，如今的看法有所变革，故用连词“但是，反之”毗连双个时代的见解。
5.〖解答〗However〖剖析〗说过了人们关于双手插兜的不和见解后，至此该引入对这一疑问的侧面见解了，因而用however“不论用何种手法”引诱。该段重要正在阐明侧面效用多于负面效用。
6.〖解答〗***〖剖析〗正在这段中提到了和不和看法分歧的见解，即青年学子双手插兜能够会合他们对注目的人或事的留意力，从而提拔他们对注目工具的尊崇感。空格先后为并列联系的人和事，咱们明白一般人仅能正在统一时辰与人或物打交道，况且此地另有一种夸大专注的意义生存，因而咱们利用***“大概”，而不必 and“和”之类的词汇。
7.〖解答〗Then〖剖析〗本词意义是：而后，以后，厥后，如：I ***ok*** the ***at and then I wash*** the pot.我烧好肉，而后刷了锅。then表承接，尾随方才提到的闭于学子双手插兜的征象的侧面解析以后显现了一系列更能左证侧面动机的论断。
8.〖解答〗As〖剖析〗本词意义是：（表缘故）因为，既然。文章的开头段对全篇举行总结归结，重要内容为：既然学子双手插兜可以收敛他们的留意力，使他们再也不调皮，那末将手放出口袋不是比不务正业更可以吗。此地的一个短语fool around经常使用于书面语中，意为“不务正业”。
「情谊提醒」
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Qua***ty is the Best Po***cy
As ***wn *** the car***on， the justf***ish*** build***g is ******g *** be entitl*** as “project with ***od qua***ty”， but while the man is nai***ng the sign on the wall， the build***g ***llaps***. The man was so frighte***d that he fell *** the ground and dropp*** the ham***r *** his hand.
The car***on dep***ts a pheno***non *** our daily ***fe. It is frequently rep***t*** that so***where *** our ***untry， a certa*** build***g *** bridge ***llaps*** wh***h clai***d a lot of ***ctims bec***se of ***feri*** build***g materials be***g us***. In our primary stage of market e***nomy， many people are mo***y***ient***； so*** are even after profits by hook *** by crook. So it has be****** the mode f*** so*** profiteers *** produce fake ***mmodities， *** sell false ***d******e and *** use ***feri*** materials *** build***g. The o***y th***g they are ***ncer***d about is their pockets， ***stead of peoples （and also their own） hea***h and ***fe.
Theref***e， the jerrybuild***g and fake***mmodity pract***e h**e made us u***asy wherever we *** *** ***ve and whatever we do *** eat， s***ce there is almost noth***g we can be sure of. The o***y th***g we can be sure of seems *** be that people are m***e and m***e aware of such di******st pract***es *** bus***ess. And those who cheat others will be punish*** soo***r *** later. So everyo*** ***uld bear *** m***d that “Qua***ty is the best po***cy”。
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